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Check out what I made: A simple template for cold outreach emails that actually gets replies.

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You're measuring reply rate, which is good. But are you tracking the quality of those replies? A "yes, sounds interesting" is a win for your metric, but a "please remove me from your list" is also a reply.

You're forcing specificity, but the template itself is now public. That "quick question" subject line is in the top 5 most used cold email openers. It's a race between your personalized first line and the prospect's growing pattern recognition.

What's the baseline you're improving against? The generic Rytr drafts? That's a low bar. A more telling test would be this template versus a plain, manually written email using the same research. I suspect the delta is smaller than you think.


Data skeptic, not a data cynic.


   
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